When i miss you
I just close my eyes
And think of you
When i miss you.
Those lovely days
I had the craze to graze in thy eyes
And seek my love in ten million ways
Those lovely days
When i took your hand
It felt so warm
With all the love that we deserved
Ohh !!! when i took your hand.
I hope you knew
When i took your hand
It felt so warm
With all the love that we deserved
Ohh !!! when i took your hand.
I hope you knew
The promises were true
I gave you my heart
I hope you knew that was all i had.
Yet you tossed my heart
With your randomn taunts
And it swirled around before crumbling to ground
Ohh!! You tossed my heart ....
You decided to hurt me
As you failed to understand
That true love is hard to find
Yet you hurt me,in your own kind.
It was you
And you know it too
Cannot cut out my heart because it is there you belong
Ohh !! it's true , you would never get the clue.
I gave you my heart
I hope you knew that was all i had.
Yet you tossed my heart
With your randomn taunts
And it swirled around before crumbling to ground
Ohh!! You tossed my heart ....
You decided to hurt me
As you failed to understand
That true love is hard to find
Yet you hurt me,in your own kind.
It was you
And you know it too
Cannot cut out my heart because it is there you belong
Ohh !! it's true , you would never get the clue.
~[A][B]~
20 comments:
Hey... it seems to end abruptly.... I mean continuity is lost somewhere... would like you to write some more on this...
@Rups
i have deliberately ended it this way , it symbolizes the end of partial sadness the character starts feeling down te flow and then suddenly grows weary of it and shakes and moves forward with life...
Atleast that was the intention .. dont know how much i succeeded.
gud it was.... almost perfect...
that was a good one abhinav. enjoyed reading it.
Thanks Gopika for motivating me further. Hope u enjoyed the other posts too :)
gud one...liked it
Thanks Jyoti !!!
Hey!
I visited here after your redirected me to your blog.(from writer's lounge).
Very well written, bringing out the feeling of missing someone really well. Though the ending was abrupt. :)
I know its a pretty late response, but blame my lazy bones for that! :)
@Rose
thanks for reading my work.
hope u liked the other posts too.
as for the abrupt ending please have a look at the second comment .
it says -->
i have deliberately ended it this way , it symbolizes the end of partial sadness the character starts feeling down te flow and then suddenly grows weary of it and shakes and moves forward with life...
Atleast that was the intention .. dont know how much i succeeded.
~[A][B]~
very nice.. i specially like the ending .. the last two lines..
let work like this keep coming !!!!
@ anonymous
thanks !!! hope u enjoyed the other posts too ...
~[A][B]~
Nice to read your blog. You seem to be very friendly and deep thinker.
I appreciate your wordings.
hattz off to you sir.... rly commndbl..!!
@gargi Thanks for appreciating my work !!
awesome!!
@Pinky
Thanks again !!! :)
its amazing...:)
Beautifully penned:)
@neha Thanks for reading the post ... hope you enjoyed the other posts in the blog too !!
@sHoNa thank you so much ... it feels nice to be appreciated by a person who is so good a blogger herself.
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