It's you, probably it's true
The dandelions that you love to carry
Reminds me of the tooth fairy,
Yet you don't have a clue,
It's you, probably it's true
It's you, probably it's true
Holding onto your hand my heart beats like a band,
Playing the most beautiful lyrics
No one could deny but cherish
It's you, probably it's true.
It's you, probably it's true
When you walk by my side,i feel my head held so high
The most precious person i have
Like a diamond in the sky,
It's you, probably it's true
It's you, probably it's true
I have fallen in love with your beautiful smile
Which make me run that extra mile
Just cannot think of life without you
Probably it's true it's definitely you.
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6 comments:
nicely written...i liked the title...nd specially the last line..keep up the good work.
oye...kuch kam lag raha hai....bahut choti si likhi hai yaar...mood aate aate toh the end ho gaya....lekin bhaut achi likhi hai.....
@Tanu thanks, keep reading and keep suggesting !!!
@Surbhi i will elaborate on this and mail it to you , mujhe laga yeh aur badi ho jayegi toh sab log bore ho jayenge i could still add 4-5 paras to it ....
nice... but utna acha nahi hai jitna ho sakta tha...
i mean while reading your poems mayb the expectation s too high...
make it a bit more personalised... may be.. ;)
i think this is my favourite... because the words, its you, its probably true have a very nice ring to them... also... the simple language used make it really crisp and it touches a chord!... awesome!!..... i love the way i give sucha critical analysis when i'm such an amateur myself ..hehe!!..... but it ROCKS!!
oh btw i also absolutely love the accompanying illustration.. mayb thats the reason this one reaches out to me more than ur other works coz illustrations work better then just pictures for me!!...
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